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Okay I won't do any new concepts. I guess the reason why I kept redoing it is because I didn't like the other concepts as much. I had to keep doing new concepts until I was happy with something. There is a fine line between dull and ordinary and unique yet simple. I'm trying to go for unique yet simple. The first redo seemed too ordinary.

I'd like a critique of my current layout, after having made changes to it. If you could, please that would be great. Thanks! http://suefeng.net

Nice site! I like the simplicity. It's clean yet effective. The video seems broken on the front page though. I see green stuff all pixellated. I like the gallery. Maybe make the logo Monstra go more to the left so it aligns with the stuff at the bottom.

Good work! It may look better if there's no white space at the bottom. Put some padding on the bottom in the blue footer though so the white text has some room to breathe. Also stay consistent with the spacing at the top, whether or not to have the blue background at the top like on the front page, or have no blue background at the top and just the white as on the other pages. I like the color combination.

The layout and color scheme is nice. Make sure you keep the spacing consistent on both sides throughout all pages. Your About page for instance, has very little space on the left while your other pages have more space. Maybe the "Login with Facebook" button will look better below "Login with your Facebook account on top of the page to post or create profile." The the blue buttons on the front page may look better if they are aligned with the edge of the banner. On the contact page "Anyone who wish" should be changed to "Anyone who wishes"

This looks really nice! Something small as a suggestion is having the same spacing at the top and on the bottom. Right now the text on the top is further to the left while the text on the bottom is closer to the middle on both sides. The spacing in the middle container is slightly different on both sides.

I changed it to this: http://suefeng.net

I made another one that's somewhat similar. I may like this better. I reduced the borders around the images.

How is this for a start?

Wow these are amazing! I have a lot of work to do then. Thanks smoseley! I'll work on some mock ups and post them here later.

Thanks smoseley. Do you have any suggestions for a better design? I'm willing to scrap the current one.

The animations are fun to watch. Words on the page are hard to read, however. Also, the image is smaller than the window and only takes up a portion of the page. The words run past the image and onto the black space below. Perhaps you can move the text blurb up so it doesn't go into the black area. There's space between it and the title text. Play around with different colors for the word Stargate (maybe black or dark grey) and maybe not fade out the login form in the animation. Or you can move the word Stargate so it's not in the star looking thing. It may be nice to have a page with screenshots of the game and descriptions on game play. Good work!

I enjoy the site content. It really is funny stuff. Keep up the great work! Some little things though, in your heading "THATS SOME FUNNY SHIT." the word THATS should have an apostrophe. "were" in "Basically were looking for someone to design us a free Logo. In exchange well offer a Link on our front page." should also have an apostrophe. Maybe get rid of Signs, Animals, Gif and Meme at the top as it is in the Categories already. The layout is more serious than the contents. Black, grey, white and blue I mean, but it looks nice otherwise. Maybe I'm being picky. Perhaps the logo will give it more personality. Those are just some suggestions. I'm not sure what logo you're talking about, but I'm willing to critique that.

Hello, I created a Web site for my portfolio of projects I worked on. I'm using it to try to help me find a job. I would like some feedback on the layout. 1. What is your first impression? Is the page memorable? 2. How is the navigation? 3. What do you think of the color combination? 4. What do you think of the layout of the pages? 5. Is the font, line-height, etc okay? 6. Any other helpful feedback would be much appreciated. The site can be found at http://suefeng.net Any sort of feedback is much appreciated. Thank you!

My first impression of the site was not so good. The web page does not look good in Google Chrome, the browser I use. The Booklibrary Top 10 is too wide for the sidebar. It runs into the text in the middle of the page. The sidebars have more content than the center area. The Books link takes you to a new page layout rather than using the same theme as the rest of the site and the image at the top is broken. There doesn't seem to be much content. The banner image on the other template is broken as well. The layout is forgettable. Sorry for being harsh. You still have a ways to go, but with some more work, you can make it look better. Put less content in the sidebars, and make sure the content doesn't run into the middle section. Make sure your images are not broken. Add more site content. Those are my suggestions.