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Site looks great, the photos crack me up though!

 

Why/How?

 

Edit: I know the people are ugly, but the pictures are really professional, right?

Edit2: How much would the site cost, It has a full cms system, login system, and a php/javascript gallery system. :P

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Why/How?

 

Yeah, the images look professional. The people just look like tools (hope its not someone you know ;))

 

Site costs really should be based upon what you think your time is worth. Just looking at your site, you can't really tell whats behind it (thats why I moved this thread to Website Critique instead of the Beta test board, theres not much functionality to test) so I'de hate to estimate.

 

Ive built cms's for a little under $10000, but then Ive also built them for less than $2000.

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You know what? I don't like the main pictures in the 'gallery' or 'about me' pages. There off centre. If I was (again) hiring a wedding photographer, that might throw me off a little.

 

How about judging by only the design?

 

If that was just a static site. You might be lucky to get $500 - $600 from someone who didn't know any better.

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You know what? I don't like the main pictures in the 'gallery' or 'about me' pages. There off centre. If I was (again) hiring a wedding photographer, that might throw me off a little.

 

I have just uploaded the pictures that he sent me on a CD, he will further upload much better, and delete some in the gallery, for the about me section, i got those images off a free website, i don't know what to use. haha.

 

ALSO: CAN AN ADMIN PLEASE CHANGE MY ORIGINAL POST TO

cl*ssicprophotogr*phy.com

replace * with a

THANKS
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I like the look overall.. very nice and clean.

 

- I do think that currently, the pricing tab is not useful. The resulting essence is someone clicking on pricing only to be asked to go to contact. I would have a look around at other photographers sites for rates if it is an issue of not knowing just how much to charge. If this is not the case and you do know how much to charge, then I would suggest listing a pricing breakdown on that page. Give people an idea of how much as opposed to giving them a link that serves no purpose. You can list different category packages.. and offer some more custom prices via contact.

 

- Your site does not validate.

- Nor does your CSS.

 

Good stuff though overall.

 

Cheers,

 

NRG

 

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I don't think the background looks very smooth....  Something about it bugs me.

 

 

 

Besides that, everything looks good (but I must agree that the pictures do look kind of ridiculous).

 

 

Oh and if I were a potential client, the Price List page would annoy me.  I would expect an actual price list, not a referral to the contact page.

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I'm going to work on the Price List, for the background, i don't know how to fix that, my eyes aren't that sensitive to notice the dark spots.

 

Also: What pictures looks ridiculous? Please point them out.

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I'm not sure what's going on in the picture on the homepage.  She has a tiara, so I would assume prom queen, but it's daytime.....  Weird.

 

 

On the About Me page, the picture just looks silly.

 

 

 

 

Oh, just noticed:

 

Born in Montenegro in 1979, Benny was

educated in United States and is fluent in

English, Albanian, and the Yugoslavian language.

 

That's worded awkwardly.  There's no parallelism.

 

 

Also, I don't like the gallery being one couple.  It should have more sample of different work.  And that couple isn't convincing at all.

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1. I'm not sure what's going on in the picture on the homepage.  She has a tiara, so I would assume prom queen, but it's daytime.....  Weird.

 

 

2. On the About Me page, the picture just looks silly.

 

 

 

 

3. Oh, just noticed:

 

Born in Montenegro in 1979, Benny was

educated in United States and is fluent in

English, Albanian, and the Yugoslavian language.

 

That's worded awkwardly.  There's no parallelism.

 

 

4. Also, I don't like the gallery being one couple.  It should have more sample of different work.  And that couple isn't convincing at all.

 

1. Marriage? (Someone is slow today... :P)

2. Changed it, looked retarded, I thought the same thing, but my brilliant brother was like "oh mah gawd, use that shit" (Keep in mind, we are not working with frigging porn stars, we are capturing real, normal people)

3. Small error, Big whoop :D

4. Give an idea for me, I am out of them!

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for the most part i like its clean layout but im not sure the width of the navbar and footer should extend past content ive always felt that looked kinda wierd to me

 

instead of a contact page with just an email address and phone number on it i would do a contact form it seems more easy for users to contact that way instead of opening a mail cleint and doing it all that way...

 

 

the footer text also seems out of place like below the darker line like its half on the darker part of the background and some below that

 

 

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whats the log in up top for?

 

if its admin remove it as it will give users the thought that theres a members section and might confuse them..

i assume this is admin as i dont see a join link anywhere just give the link to admin to the admin of the page i think.. i just noticed it up there and was like crap members section could be a cool idea wonder whats there and couldnt join to find out

 

 

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whats the log in up top for?

 

if its admin remove it as it will give users the thought that theres a members section and might confuse them..

i assume this is admin as i dont see a join link anywhere just give the link to admin to the admin of the page i think.. i just noticed it up there and was like crap members section could be a cool idea wonder whats there and couldnt join to find out

 

 

 

So what's your idea? I'm making a site for a newbie at using the internet, where should i put the login box?

edit: I put "Administrator Login" in front of it, or should i just place the box at the bottom of the pages?

edit2: i kinda like how the login is there

edit3: screw the email form in the contact me section, a real person who i interested would call the phone.

edit4: why arent i using proper spelling or grammar? i hate working with php for hours

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