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jagthehat

Sales page may need improvement

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That header graphic is horrid.  Looks like the woman's picture was taken on a whim in an office hallway one random afternoon, and the rest is bad fonts on top of clip art.  It just screams amateur/10 minutes of work.

 

Also, are your 165 prospects supposed to know who Sheila Griffin and Jo Evans are?  What are their qualifications and experience?  I mean, right now the page is saying "Two random women want you to pay them $21 for health tips of unknown quality."  That isn't really going to entice anyone to shell out cash.

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I strongly suspect the OP is spam.

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I strongly suspect the OP is spam.

 

Probably.  Still, the critique is valid, IMO.

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I agree. What you said is spot on. Especially about the graphic being horrible.

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