jagthehat Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I sent a broadcast to 165 prospects with a link to my new sales page, and expected at least one sale -- but nothing. Can someone please advise on improvements. Or should I wait till my list is bigger. Thanks for reading. http://www.slim-dreams.com/slim3.html Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinM1 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 That header graphic is horrid. Looks like the woman's picture was taken on a whim in an office hallway one random afternoon, and the rest is bad fonts on top of clip art. It just screams amateur/10 minutes of work. Also, are your 165 prospects supposed to know who Sheila Griffin and Jo Evans are? What are their qualifications and experience? I mean, right now the page is saying "Two random women want you to pay them $21 for health tips of unknown quality." That isn't really going to entice anyone to shell out cash. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu2000 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I strongly suspect the OP is spam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinM1 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I strongly suspect the OP is spam. Probably. Still, the critique is valid, IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu2000 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I agree. What you said is spot on. Especially about the graphic being horrible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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