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I created this is 6 days for a e-commerce site. Its not very design heavy but its functional. Let me know what you think. www.calmktg.com/songs

 

I will have alot more to come soon.

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The site's purpose makes no sense at all.  You've titled it "CMG - SCE SONGS Order Site" but all I see is shit for t-shirts.

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The 'California Marketing Group' part of the logo is barely readable (too small, and blue on blue is a bad idea).  Since there's virtually no content on the index, it looks like an advertisement for Southern California Edison.

 

For the shirt store part, why did you introduce mint green for your boxes?  Why not use the light yellow you already use as the background for the navigation?  You also need to work on each item's form inputs.  The color <select> cuts into the last letter(s) of the options available.  Both the color and size <select> elements should be aligned.  Make the color <select> the same width as the size <select>.  Finally, your quantity textbox needs to appear to be on the same line as the buttons to the right of it.  In Firefox, at least, the textbox is a bit lower than the buttons.

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...it looks like an advertisement for Southern California Edison.

I just realized that's what the SCE stands for.  The most important thing I think you can do as a designer is illustrate what the site is, what's going on, and what means what.  It is clearly confusing what the entire intent of the site is.

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I just realized that's what the SCE stands for.  The most important thing I think you can do as a designer is illustrate what the site is, what's going on, and what means what.  It is clearly confusing what the entire intent of the site is.

 

I would understand the confusion if it was a general public site.

 

Its a fulfillment site for SCE. They are the only ones intended to use it. They pre buy 200,000.00 in shirts and then each department orders what they need/want.

 

Thank you for the critiques I will be taking action and updating the site.

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I just realized that's what the SCE stands for.  The most important thing I think you can do as a designer is illustrate what the site is, what's going on, and what means what.  It is clearly confusing what the entire intent of the site is.

 

I would understand the confusion if it was a general public site.

 

Its a fulfillment site for SCE. They are the only ones intended to use it. They pre buy 200,000.00 in shirts and then each department orders what they need/want.

 

Thank you for the critiques I will be taking action and updating the site.

 

I'm guessing that in this context, SONGS does not refer to music, but rather some group/program for SCE.  Would have been nice to get that context in order for us to not think "It's named the songs store, but all it sells are shirts."

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Ya im sorry it stand for San Onofre Nuclear Generating Station out of San Diego CA

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Did you let them know you were posting their internal fulfillment site on a public form?

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The site is in testing, not live yet and i control the orders. They are also aware.

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