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aditd

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At first glance it looks like another blog site, nothing to do with a book.

 

The middle section just looks dreadful with the uneven edges to the left and right. As well as the top navigation. The overlap makes it look rather bland.

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Never has a website failed to explain what the hell it's about so badly before. I'm not sure if you meant it to be intriguing or something, but nobody will buy your book off the back of that website, because they won't know what they're buying! That blurb on the intro page is so out of context it barely makes sense, especially when slapped next to a picture of some random bamboo hut?

 

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I will also add, you're using a theme. Design-wise there's nothing to comment on, except on what does a bamboo hut have to do with anything?

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