Quick Question

[N-Bomb(Nerd)]

I've spent the last few days creating my script and as of right now I have a beta version completed. I was wondering if there would be someone willing to talk with me on msn or aim and go over my script with me. I just really want someone to tell me if there's easier ways of doing things or if I've just cluttered the code. Also, I was hoping to add a few more things to this and didn't know how to approach this and was hoping someone could help me figure out the best way to go about that.

 

Also, the reason I don't post the code publicly here is because I plan on launching a website with this later on and don't really want it public.. so I'm trusting the person that's able to help me.