bourgm Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 Ok.. So I have created Letters To Prison.com (http://www.letterstoprison.com). The competition is WriteAPrisoner . com What do you think of the layout? I'm still working on the SEO. Google isn't even listing via the keywords yet. Only thing it lists is the url address via search. Thanks, Michael Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RichardRotterdam Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 Alright here goes. When I try to go back to the homepage of this site I always receive the splash page with the age warning. Perhaps you could place a cookie that remembers if a user has already visited the website. That way you don't have to see the splash page every time you try to access the website's homepage. The navigation looks odd for me, try the website in Firefox and you'll see that the last navigation item "contact us" is written over 2 lines. I think the Letters to prison logo does not stand out enough from the rest of the page. Maybe you should make this larger. This might be just me but I think cutting off the ".com" and placing it on a new line looks a bit ugly. The contrast between text and the background isn't big enough try to make all the text of your website as readable as possible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bourgm Posted August 22, 2009 Author Share Posted August 22, 2009 Alright here goes. When I try to go back to the homepage of this site I always receive the splash page with the age warning. Perhaps you could place a cookie that remembers if a user has already visited the website. That way you don't have to see the splash page every time you try to access the website's homepage. The navigation looks odd for me, try the website in Firefox and you'll see that the last navigation item "contact us" is written over 2 lines. I think the Letters to prison logo does not stand out enough from the rest of the page. Maybe you should make this larger. This might be just me but I think cutting off the ".com" and placing it on a new line looks a bit ugly. The contrast between text and the background isn't big enough try to make all the text of your website as readable as possible. I changed the logo. Not the best, but bigger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KnottyAlder Posted August 25, 2009 Share Posted August 25, 2009 It feels like there are three separate sites instead of one. I don't like how they are not uniform in their design. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bourgm Posted September 14, 2009 Author Share Posted September 14, 2009 Thanks.. Working on a re-design. Hopefully I can also increase my google ranking too. Right now it is at 0. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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