thewooleymammoth
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I feel like this thread has been here a while and no ones really critiqued.
text effects on the banner text. The white blends in.
Im not a fan of the white padding on #wrapper. I think it would look better if the banner & footer met the gray.
Icons are pixelated
Links need to have some text IMO
5 errors in css
222 errors in html
needs a fav icon
I like the general layout though. Just keep tweakin things till you are happy.
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on the top right, as im going through your pictures it gives me some sort of nav. I would call that a bit of a breadcrumb because it tells me i started at home then went to an album then to another. The links appear as i go through each page.
Perhaps thats not what you were going for. However it appears that your link system is a little broken. Im testing it using firefox. This site might help you
Also you should have a page title in the header.
There also appears to be some html tag closing errors
(im assuming that its due to improper echos during loops)
here is a link to your page validation. There are tons of errors. Fixing these will help with browser compatibility.
Also you might consider some kind of constant nav that doesnt change from page to page.
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your breadcrumbs should go left to right and you should make them more obvious (since they are the only form of nav)
Pretty damn good for a first site
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Those sites are gonna be updated at the end of the week. I will work on bring out the nav.
Just simple things like the meta keyword and description tag and a bit of text content added to the site, possibly with a few of the keywords "stuffed" into the text content without being too obvious that they're in there for the sake of crawlers.
Definitly gonna happen thanks.
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didnt you already have a thread?
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© 2010-2015 www.EricWooley.com
It's good to know that you are covered with copyright for the next 5 years. I was worried there that someone from the future would rip you off in 2014, but luckily you have that covered. I'm a bit worried about 2016 though.
hahaha originally i copied that text from a different footer. Thanks for reminding me to change it.
I am also worried about 2016.... idk what ill do
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Im not sure whats wrong with the seo? i have the h1 in the upper right the h2 in the center with the name of the image/site? I also have the page title pretty well documented... Am i missing something? Not trying to sound defensive just not sure.
I took some code from my old site which used ajax but i only too the js part
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Actually there isnt any ajax
And there is only a little bit of usability lost when you dont have javascript. The scrolling menus on the side dont work
the contact page just hasnt been made yet.Thanks for the review.
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its not 100% done. I need to add some more content and there will be a paragraph below the pictures where i can say something. It has been redesigned to go with my Digital art. Tell me what you think.
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i gotta say i liked it more before
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use vmware to test on ie. I recommend you setup the machine with ie7 and 256mb or ram with a res of 1024 x 768. Then you will see your site as people with low end computers do.
http://www.vmware.com/products/player/ i believe its free for a basic version.
I wont catch you fish, or even teach you how to fish. But that's where you can find a fishing pole.
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I dont know where you added colors? the red text headers?
thats interesting that you can do rounded corners with webkit. Too bad you still cant in ie. DAMN YOU MICROSOFT! holding back progress on a daily basis.
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i was on the school computer using xp and firefox. It looks fine on my computer at home running 7 and firefox. Ill check again for you tomorrow, that is a little wierd.
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that would make you like a coder/designer since ten or 12 years old haha. Nice, wish i could put that on my resume.
I would say maybe some dull yellows and blues would work for those icons. Or you could give them that shiny feel. just about any colors will go with what you have so far.
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the colors look much better as do the links, there appears to be one error in your layout though ( see image)
You should have the white background extend to the end of the bar. It also looks kinda funny at the bottom. You can really tell its off because of the right bar at the bottom.
also lots of html errors
and css errors
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for being a life coach your site sure makes me feel sad, i would consider some brighter colors.
and that nav really doesnt look good imo,
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you could chnage the color of the icons.
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I like the svid, the rest is a little bland (not that im one to talk about being bland)
I like the general look though.
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set background-repeat: no-repeat; then ill look at it haha, i cant tell whats supposed to be there or not.
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the background color for your body/"Youtube Video clips" is e9e9e9 and your content bg color is white. They are too close. Can barely see it.
and the best of youtube site appears to be the exact same thing. If i were a user, once i discovered they're site, i would never type your site into the browser again because they have way more video's than you. They also have a video rating system and many other features you don't have (unless you plan to develop them).
Also your banner is far to simple and unclean looking. With too much stuff, looks like someone made it who doesn't know how to create graphics. You should also have your url in there instead of Youtube Video clips
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its too simple and not centered. that gray needs to be white or a darker gray, i can barely tell that its there. You might also put in some red color. People will associate it with youtube.
take away the link that links to a better site. Not a good idea if you are trying to grow
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