priti Posted January 3, 2009 Share Posted January 3, 2009 Hello Members, I have created presentation on "PHP For Beginner" please follow the link http://pritisolanki.wordpress.com/2009/01/01/php-for-beginner/ and let me know your views on the slides for its content to add,delete or update. Thanks Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam Posted January 3, 2009 Share Posted January 3, 2009 Not exactly a 'website' critique, so not a lot to say. Looks like a PowerPoint template..? On the 'why I am interested in PHP' section you've put: "Cross plate form", shouldn't it be "Cross-platform"? I wouldn't say it's easy to learn either, perhaps the very basics? The 'am I comfortable with PHP' slide is pretty pointless! It's not very well written... To be honest I can't really see a point to this presentation. Everything you can find there is available as an "Introduction" to any full PHP tutorial. A Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/#findComment-728691 Share on other sites More sharing options...
priti Posted January 4, 2009 Author Share Posted January 4, 2009 Gr8 !!! Thanks Adam it helped me a lot Wish you must have put in what all i can add to make it perfect . Regards Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/#findComment-729226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Ummm as I think someone added a similar comment on your site, I don't the think topic your creating the presentation on will ever allow you to make it perfect. Not in a useful sense at least.. If anyone wanted to find out about PHP they can simply Google for "PHP". If this is just a personal project, to gain experience creating presentations or whatever... I'd probably recommend rewriting each slide; making better use of the English language. Full of grammer and punctuation errors. Also the font is exactly the same throughout, no bold text or sub-headers... It's very basic, basically. A Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/#findComment-729295 Share on other sites More sharing options...
priti Posted January 4, 2009 Author Share Posted January 4, 2009 yes that's what i kept it - it has to be "very basic" yes i am learning some in presentation part so doing this exercise.But still u didn't told me what can i add more to make it more perfect EXCEPT grammer and punctuation errors. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/#findComment-729349 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohdang888 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Go to google. Type in PHP tutorials. You want to include everything. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/#findComment-729378 Share on other sites More sharing options...
priti Posted January 8, 2009 Author Share Posted January 8, 2009 I don't want to add tutorial contents to it. As adam comment he missed some points in the slides for beginner so i wanted to collect them how can i google for "Adams thoughts" on Google :-) Google is not yet so advanced !! That presentation means for the first starter !! who is thinking whether he sud work in PHP or not !! Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/139322-plese-comment-on-my-first-presentation/#findComment-732245 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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