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Not exactly a 'website' critique, so not a lot to say. Looks like a PowerPoint template..?

 

On the 'why I am interested in PHP' section you've put: "Cross plate form", shouldn't it be "Cross-platform"? I wouldn't say it's easy to learn either, perhaps the very basics?

 

The 'am I comfortable with PHP' slide is pretty pointless! It's not very well written...

 

To be honest I can't really see a point to this presentation. Everything you can find there is available as an "Introduction" to any full PHP tutorial.

 

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Ummm as I think someone added a similar comment on your site, I don't the think topic your creating the presentation on will ever allow you to make it perfect. Not in a useful sense at least.. If anyone wanted to find out about PHP they can simply Google for "PHP".

 

If this is just a personal project, to gain experience creating presentations or whatever... I'd probably recommend rewriting each slide; making better use of the English language. Full of grammer and punctuation errors. Also the font is exactly the same throughout, no bold text or sub-headers... It's very basic, basically.

 

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yes that's what i kept it - it has to be "very basic"

 

yes i am learning some in presentation part so doing this exercise.But still u didn't told me what can i add more to make it more perfect EXCEPT grammer and punctuation errors.

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I don't want to add tutorial contents to it. As adam comment he missed some points in the slides for beginner so i wanted to collect them how can i google for "Adams thoughts" on Google :-) Google is not yet so advanced !!

 

That presentation means for the first starter !! who is thinking whether he sud work in PHP or not !!

 

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