only one Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Hi, just wondering what you guys think of it. http://chrishemmens.net/ Thanks. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
serverman Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 main thing is it is a smooth clean layout kinda serif style layout but you used a sanserif font. you might want to spell check also you might want to try to keep the height the same. the style looks great but it has become a cliche almost because so many sites have that look but it looks good. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767043 Share on other sites More sharing options...
only one Posted February 20, 2009 Author Share Posted February 20, 2009 main thing is it is a smooth clean layout kinda serif style layout but you used a sanserif font. you might want to spell check also you might want to try to keep the height the same. the style looks great but it has become a cliche almost because so many sites have that look but it looks good. Ok, thanks. I got rid of all the spelling mistakes and changed the font. I do have to admit it looks nicer with a serif font. Thanks for the ideas. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767075 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcombs_31 Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Its not bad but everything feels weighted to the left. I also think the logo should always be above your menu. Colors are fine. Layout is pretty simple but nothing really wrong with it. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767183 Share on other sites More sharing options...
tivrfoa Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 it is a nice site. I also think the logo should always be above your menu. well stated!! I would not have a portfolio's page, if I have nothing to show. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767222 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian W Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 I agree with them, logo first. I like easy lotto, to bad it is very difficult to get something like that licensed in the USA. Keep it up, I don't think you'll have to go into body building... Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767337 Share on other sites More sharing options...
only one Posted February 20, 2009 Author Share Posted February 20, 2009 I agree with them, logo first. I like easy lotto, to bad it is very difficult to get something like that licensed in the USA. Keep it up, I don't think you'll have to go into body building... What's wrong with bodybuilding? It's going to stay my hobby forever anyway. And I can get EasyLotto liscenced easy enough. The only problem is the competition here and the advertisement. I need some money to get me started off. But i'll get it set up within another year hopefully. Any ideas what I could do about the logo first thing? I don't want to change the layout too much. Should I round off the tabs and set the under the logo? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian W Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Nothing wrong with it, more money in programming though. Initial cost on a project like that could be tough. It looks good now as for the header.... but the footer could be smaller. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767426 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabrydesign Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Very nicely done, I really like the color palette and use of serifs. However, the logo stands out since it is the only sans-serif thing on the page. I'd add something to the Bio page so that it isn't just the home page with less content on it. And on the contact page, the "reason" box could use some better styling, so it doesn't look bloated. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767857 Share on other sites More sharing options...
only one Posted February 21, 2009 Author Share Posted February 21, 2009 Very nicely done, I really like the color palette and use of serifs. However, the logo stands out since it is the only sans-serif thing on the page. I'd add something to the Bio page so that it isn't just the home page with less content on it. And on the contact page, the "reason" box could use some better styling, so it doesn't look bloated. What browser are you using if the drop down menu looks "bloated"? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767881 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabrydesign Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Very nicely done, I really like the color palette and use of serifs. However, the logo stands out since it is the only sans-serif thing on the page. I'd add something to the Bio page so that it isn't just the home page with less content on it. And on the contact page, the "reason" box could use some better styling, so it doesn't look bloated. What browser are you using if the drop down menu looks "bloated"? Google Chrome. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/146091-critique-please/#findComment-767888 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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