ABM Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 http://adroitbusinessmachines.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maq Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 You have to scroll over to view all the products in the "Computer Systems" link. From the "Computer Systems" link, when you click on many of the view product options the "spec" column is to narrow. http://adroitbusinessmachines.com/ComputerSystems.aspx#cat=28 There's a lot of annoying ads that right now most likely won't generate any revenue. I would suggest removing them , until you have a big traffic base, since they really don't bring anything positive to the table and just eat up real estate, page-load time, and my patience. IMO, the site isn't bad, just a few minor tweaks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Share Posted October 18, 2009 Thank you for the quick reply. I removed the adds at the bottom of the pages. I will look into how to resolve some of the other problems tommorow. I am getting a bit tired so I guess it is time to call it a night. Thanks again for the help, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lostprophetpunk Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 The first thing I notice when viewing the homepage, is all of the links in the navigation...then all the links under it. Maybe try to compact it down a bit, so there isn't too much stuff for the navigation. - The computer systems page...with the drop downs. That could be improved. As I have looked at all of the drop down menus there, and there are only like 1-3 options other than the 'View Product' option. It would look better if you have links instead of these, and make the boxes slightly bigger. It would make for much easier finding of specific things. - CSS. I would have had a look at your CSS, had you not have four different CSS files in the source code...why not just have one or maybe two...not four. - Validation. 76 errors. Not a bad concept for the design, but still needs a lot of work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Share Posted October 18, 2009 OK, I did get rid of some of the links at the bottom of the page. Considering maybe switching to an overlay for the computer systems... not quite sure what i want to do there. The dropdowns I really was hoping to keep, as my product line grows that will be filled in. The CSS i have to look into as I use a WYSIWYG editor and some of the CSS is part of that. But overall I will clean it up some, I have been really busy lately so bare with me. Thank you so much for the constructive criticism, it is greatly appreciated! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eatfishy Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 I think the pictures your showing are professional looking, but lacks diversity of different race. IMO, if you want to capture a broader audiences, you may want to add more diversity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABM Posted October 18, 2009 Author Share Posted October 18, 2009 That is definately a great suggestion! I will definately make the images more diverse. I hadn't even realized that it looked that way. Thank you so much for your great suggestions! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dorky Posted October 19, 2009 Share Posted October 19, 2009 i love the header but the rest of the page is very standard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABM Posted October 19, 2009 Author Share Posted October 19, 2009 i love the header but the rest of the page is very standard. I added a background image. Do you think that helps or not? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dorky Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 i love the header but the rest of the page is very standard. I added a background image. Do you think that helps or not? i was thinking along the lines of some boxes around text and/or bgcolors for headings. small but powerful details. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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