4starresumes Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 Please let me know what you think of content, especially main page. It doesn't seem compelling enough yet I don't want to come off like a used car salesman. Could really use advice. Thank you! Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/216529-need-feedback-on-content-of-resume-writing-service/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu2000 Posted October 22, 2010 Share Posted October 22, 2010 It looks fantastic! Oh, wait. That must be some other site, since you didn't include a link . . . Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/216529-need-feedback-on-content-of-resume-writing-service/#findComment-1125101 Share on other sites More sharing options...
4starresumes Posted October 22, 2010 Author Share Posted October 22, 2010 Great. sorry about that. It's www.4starresumes.com Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/216529-need-feedback-on-content-of-resume-writing-service/#findComment-1125124 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 From a design point of view, it all just looks a little dull to be honest. The colour scheme's plain and bland, the text is very standard, the logo has some slight pixelation on the stars, etc. As you say it does give off the 'used car salesman' image. Also 'four' stars.. Why not five? Makes your service sound less than perfect. The layout isn't bad, and with some improvements could make the site ten times better, but you just need to liven it up. Move away from safe, neutral colours and add in some lively colours. Colour scheme generators like Adobe Kuler can help there. From a code point of view; there's a lot of inline styles, constant use of deprecated tags and attributes (font, center, bgcolor, etc.), no use of headers (h1, h2, etc.).. It was clear the moment I opened the source it had been created with 'instant web site builder' type software. I've never used "Intuit SiteBuilder by Homestead", but I'd recommend paying someone to go in and improve it for you; the most obvious benefit being your site will be better indexed by search engines. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/216529-need-feedback-on-content-of-resume-writing-service/#findComment-1126119 Share on other sites More sharing options...
4starresumes Posted October 25, 2010 Author Share Posted October 25, 2010 Thank you so much for your imput! Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/216529-need-feedback-on-content-of-resume-writing-service/#findComment-1126239 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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