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#1 aditd

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 02:21 PM

I just launched the site for my 3'th book and wanted some opinions about it.
Let me know if this section is ok with you http://www.happyno2.com/content/ ( now there are only section from each chapter vs. what could be: one full chapter ).

Link of the site is: http://www.happyno2.com/
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#2 SocialCloud

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Posted 30 January 2013 - 10:18 AM

At first glance it looks like another blog site, nothing to do with a book.

The middle section just looks dreadful with the uneven edges to the left and right. As well as the top navigation. The overlap makes it look rather bland.

#3 Adam

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Posted 31 January 2013 - 07:18 PM

Never has a website failed to explain what the hell it's about so badly before. I'm not sure if you meant it to beĀ intriguingĀ or something, but nobody will buy your book off the back of that website, because they won't know what they're buying! That blurb on the intro page is so out of context it barely makes sense, especially when slapped next to a picture of some random bamboo hut?

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I will also add, you're using a theme. Design-wise there's nothing to comment on, except on what does a bamboo hut have to do with anything?

Edited by Adam, 31 January 2013 - 07:21 PM.





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