Ninjakreborn Posted May 31, 2006 Share Posted May 31, 2006 I wanted some advice on this, I am building a site for a client, and I will be running all my sites through here, for criticism because as some advice I may not take, a lot of advice people have given me in the past helped me turn shitty sites into something work it, the address is[a href=\"http://www.moondancedesign.com\" target=\"_blank\"]Moon Dance Design[/a]I redid something she already had that was horrible and turned it into this, is this look good, or does it need surgery, good bad comments. Thanks. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcombs_31 Posted May 31, 2006 Share Posted May 31, 2006 It looks a lot better than your site. The font looks like crap and so does the header image. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/#findComment-40615 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjakreborn Posted May 31, 2006 Author Share Posted May 31, 2006 I don't know about my site, I will do some work with it I did get a lot of good remarks about it however. Thanks for the advice any more, I can't change the font unfortunately, clients orders. Header was hers. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/#findComment-40618 Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildteen88 Posted May 31, 2006 Share Posted May 31, 2006 Not a bad site design. The layout is clean and readable. However I displike the font, but i see you are actually using a font called [b]Papyrus[/b] in someareas. I would suggest you use standard fonts which most computers have by defualt such as Arial, Verdana etc or change any areas that use the papyrus font to be converted into images instead, such as the headers. (h2, h3 tags). Otherwise if a computer doesnt have the papyrus font it may look bad in areas that use that font.Also the header background image looks pixelated and distored which doest look good. Prehaps use a better crisp background image for the header.Oh another suggestion would be change the menu, so it doesnt use the browsers defualt font and lower the tone of the pink on the menu.Theres a few suggestions for you to work on. ^_^ Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/#findComment-40644 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjakreborn Posted May 31, 2006 Author Share Posted May 31, 2006 When I finish the final cut and add in all the pages then I will finish putting in the shopping cart, then I will work on some of those suggestions and start cleaning up some of that stuff. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/#findComment-40650 Share on other sites More sharing options...
steviewdr Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 You are using WAY too many fonts -your Nav - times,your text - arialyour headings - whatever it is.It does look ok-nice.Your top graphic looks very poor quality - especially the writing. HEY - FOR YOUR GALLERY - they're meant to be THUMBNAILS - do you know what THUMBNAILS are???? - you need to go to the wikipedia.Some of your thumbnails are 500Kb!!!!!!!!!Your links page with the standard Blue <a href's> bring down the quality of the website.rgds,steve Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/#findComment-40866 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjakreborn Posted June 1, 2006 Author Share Posted June 1, 2006 Sounds good when I start knocking out some sections of the site, I will keep all this in mind and use them to do changes. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/10874-what-about-this/#findComment-40887 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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