[SOLVED] Stuck

[canadabeeau]

Hi this is the design I haver for my site so far

http://www.rhodrykorb.com/Untitled.png

 

I know its not great but I have been concentrating on building the custom CMS, so I need help with what I should do to make the site look better, I do not mind if I have to do the theme all over again so dont hesitate to give suggestions

 

GUESTS email me your suggestions: rhodrykorb[at]gmail[dot]com

[TheFilmGod]

Please don't double post.

 

Overall, it's not too bad, but there is def. room for improvement.

• Way too much whitespace. Consider adding more images or text.
  
• I'm digging the logo, but the colors are going to be dificult to complement to the website.
  
• Consider changing the yellow text to a black. Text should always contrast heavily with the background color.
  
• There really isn't much content that I could critique. You should consider adding more content to the website.
  

Hope that helps.

[canadabeeau]

Sorry for the double post, i know there is not much content but I was looking for comments on the theme. Thanks for your input "TheFilmGod" I will take what you have said onboard. I would agree with you "TheFilmGod" the logos colours will be hard to compliement with the website thats I think why I am stuck in terms of the theme and making it look good. More suggestions are welcomed....

 

And guests I can see you looking at the topic so please do email me your suggestions

rhodrykorb@gmail.com

[canadabeeau]

With a bit of content this time

http://rhodrykorb.com/Untitled2.png

 

Guests who are viewing please do offer you onpion (whatever it may be, long or shor) via email rhodrykorb@gmail.com

 

PS I have added the orange cursor so u know what the menus look like when u hover over them :-)

 

THANKS

[TheFilmGod]

Are you really that religious that you have to enclose my name in quotes? I'm not some nuclear bomb or tyrant that you have to put me in quotes. I'm a person. I'm a variable. Get me outta of there!

 

Thanks for understanding $rhodry_korb.

[canadabeeau]

sorry no, Imeant it as an indication of a name not a thing, cam across wrong, sorry about that didnt mean anything bad by the " "

[canadabeeau]

I am closing this and thank all for who have helped, the picture links above are no longer availiable, I have removed the images from the server.

[jcombs_31]

You ask for a critique, reply 4 times to yourself and then remove the image to critique?  That was pretty productive.

[canadabeeau]

I closed the topic becuase, I had a large amount of conversation with other developers via msn/skype and thank them very much for thier input and dedication in helping me, i felt I was getting no where via phpfreaks so I went for other avenues, sorry if this has annoyed anyone but I will be posting asking for critique in a week again and will not shut that one off, as I have more time then to accept critique given over a period of time. That said thanks to those on phpfreaks who did respond and help ie TheFilmGod (no " " this time :-))