jagthehat Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I sent a broadcast to 165 prospects with a link to my new sales page, and expected at least one sale -- but nothing. Can someone please advise on improvements. Or should I wait till my list is bigger. Thanks for reading. http://www.slim-dreams.com/slim3.html Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/254768-sales-page-may-need-improvement/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinM1 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 That header graphic is horrid. Looks like the woman's picture was taken on a whim in an office hallway one random afternoon, and the rest is bad fonts on top of clip art. It just screams amateur/10 minutes of work. Also, are your 165 prospects supposed to know who Sheila Griffin and Jo Evans are? What are their qualifications and experience? I mean, right now the page is saying "Two random women want you to pay them $21 for health tips of unknown quality." That isn't really going to entice anyone to shell out cash. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/254768-sales-page-may-need-improvement/#findComment-1306340 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu2000 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I strongly suspect the OP is spam. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/254768-sales-page-may-need-improvement/#findComment-1306445 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinM1 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I strongly suspect the OP is spam. Probably. Still, the critique is valid, IMO. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/254768-sales-page-may-need-improvement/#findComment-1306449 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu2000 Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 I agree. What you said is spot on. Especially about the graphic being horrible. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/254768-sales-page-may-need-improvement/#findComment-1306495 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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