markjans Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 Hi guys, About 2 months ago a company in The Netherlands asked me to design a salespage for their new product. I'm almost done with the design, I already converted the design to HTML. But I'm pretty sure that there is still a lot to improve. I really want to make a good impression to this client because I know there is a lot more work to do. What I had in mind when I started with the design: - The first impression should give a short overview of the product - There should be a CTA (Call To Action) above default - Things should be clean - Not too much text - Guiding design with a step by step process - Building trust with testimonials and trusted logos LIVE PREVIEW: https://www.keywordmarketingpro.com/services/forum-domination I really appreciate if a few good designers can give me a few tips to improve my design and make it better! Also open to better CSS solutions. Thank you guys! Mark P.S. for the mod. if I placed this in the wrong section can you please move it to the right one? Thank you, my bad Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/284159-i-want-to-make-a-good-impression-to-my-client-need-help/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyberRobot Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 P.S. for the mod. if I placed this in the wrong section can you please move it to the right one? Thank you, my bad Topic moved to the Website Critique forum. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/284159-i-want-to-make-a-good-impression-to-my-client-need-help/#findComment-1459509 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDCode Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 There's so much in-line CSS that everything will be cluttered. If they ever want to make another page they'll have to copy long lines of mostly CSS. Also, the order buttons are so far down, no one will want to scroll down that far just to order. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/284159-i-want-to-make-a-good-impression-to-my-client-need-help/#findComment-1459543 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sKunKbad Posted December 14, 2013 Share Posted December 14, 2013 If you want to be impressive, you have to code impressive. For starters, you should consider responsive web design. Google it if you don't know what that is. Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/284159-i-want-to-make-a-good-impression-to-my-client-need-help/#findComment-1462311 Share on other sites More sharing options...
iwpg Posted December 17, 2013 Share Posted December 17, 2013 I feel that the header needs a little more color, as well as darker. I would also add left and right side columns as a background for the empty space, preferably darker to get the main content to stand out better. Looks nice though! Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/284159-i-want-to-make-a-good-impression-to-my-client-need-help/#findComment-1462563 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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