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#1 frustrated

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Posted 18 June 2006 - 06:33 PM

Hello,

I have a site I recently did that I would appreciate your critiques on design and that sort of thing.

[a href=\"http://www.kevmckenzie.com/\" target=\"_blank\"]KevMck Productions - MS Media Services[/a]

Thanks in advance and Happy Father's Day to any dads out there!

#2 moberemk

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Posted 18 June 2006 - 08:27 PM

Looks fine, and nice and professional. But take out the Personal link-all that does is make me lose respect for you as a webdesigner with it's... um... I don't think the vocabulary exists for it. Also, I'd suggest taking the footer and moving it into the site box itself, so it doesn't feel so detached. Once you add more of a border to the main site box, it should look much better.
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Posted 19 June 2006 - 12:49 AM

Well...just to clear the record I didn't do what's behind the personal link. This isn't my site...and the person who owns this site did the personal link stuff.

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Posted 19 June 2006 - 01:30 AM

Good, because if you did, I would have to cyber-slap you for calling yourself a web designer. That... thing... is both hideous and over-javascripted. *shudder*
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#5 freakus_maximus

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Posted 19 June 2006 - 04:55 AM

Other than what has already been said...and this is probably more for the site owner...but you should recommend that they dont;

a. Use a hotmail address. I can't imagine the host company does not provide at least a few email addresses for the site. I would think a site was unprofessional if I could not email someone at that site's address.

b. have the address on the website like that. Email addresses typed out like that are easliy harvested and they will start getting spam from it. Create a contact form with a security image to help prevent bots from you using the form for spam.

Maybe you already did say something about this. I know how that can be.

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Posted 21 June 2006 - 02:06 PM

Nice.
I dont know whats with the top white bar and also a piece of a vertical white bar on the left.

The site map and links pages are hidden away in the bottom nav. They wont be seen/gotten to from there.

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Posted 19 July 2006 - 08:13 PM

The site looks really good. I can only comment one thing about the design you might want to fix: one line too may in what could pass as a footer. Try to summarize the bottom two lines into one. It's only a minor issue, but if you fix it you can say you've got a really professional site. Because it's clean otherwise. Good colourscheme, good blend of navigation and content, nice overall solid look. My compliments.

P.S. Keep the white bars. It's a nice detail. Although it doesn't serve any pratical function, I feel you should keep them.




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