Xtremer360 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 kansasoutlawwrestling.com Thank you to anyone who checks it out@! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted March 13, 2010 Author Share Posted March 13, 2010 And when I say check it out I mean check it out to critique it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niku01 Posted March 17, 2010 Share Posted March 17, 2010 It looks nice, but is not finished. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFilmGod Posted March 17, 2010 Share Posted March 17, 2010 a quick zap with seo xray and I see that you have no meta description no heading tags and have poor semantics code. For example why are you using span tags within an ordered list. Use <li>! It looks great... but that's not because of you. It's thanks to the desinger who put together the pictures for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted March 20, 2010 Author Share Posted March 20, 2010 It is finished. Is it possible for anyone to go through and say what they think of the overall look of each of the following pages and include maybe one or two things I could do differently on css? Index Page: kansasoutlawwrestling.com Roster Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=roster Bio Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/bio.php?username=rebel Champions Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=champions Title History Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=titlehistory Event Archives Page: http://www.kansasoutlawwrestling.com/backstage/content.php?p=archives Gallery Page: http://kansasoutlawwrestling.com/gallery/main.php Some of the other pages just have a little text with queries attached to the page so nothing to critique on those. Thank you. It looks nice, but is not finished. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewooleymammoth Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 you have alot of css embedded in your page. also drop downs are possible with just css. I recommend that. also in your link you dont have the actual text. Put in the text to the link and use text-indent: -999px; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 also in your link you dont have the actual text. Put in the text to the link and use text-indent: -999px; Huh? What link? What text? I have lots of links and text on my pages. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewooleymammoth Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 your nav links tags are just <a href=''></a> they should be <a href='' style='text-indent:-999px'>Home</a> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marklarah Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 I thought it looked bare until the images kicked in then I was like whoah. Look good for what it is man, job well done imo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arbitter Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 A little bit heavy (the images and stuff) to load. People with low internetspead might not hang on as long to see the whole page. Also I find it frustrating you can't click 'social' and 'media' and stuff right away, but that you have to click on an item of the drop-down menu. Also it's annoying that the most bottom cell from a dropdown also has a white-dotted line on the bottom, right above the red. Try to fix that. But oh boy I could learn a lot about all the css you use Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted March 21, 2010 Author Share Posted March 21, 2010 But oh boy I could learn a lot about all the css you use I'm obsessed with css and love firebug. Makes things so much easier for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewooleymammoth Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 you need to center the background image. it stays on the left while the content sits in the middle, looks screwed up on wider monitors Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xcandiottix Posted March 23, 2010 Share Posted March 23, 2010 Best page I've seen on here today ... from an art stand point. Your main pages drop down menus are gross though. They look like tables that spawned out of nowhere. The lower Outlaw logo is squished... I think you used the upper one and just resized with html but it isn't proportional. Some links are broken...... otherwise.. cool site. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted May 11, 2010 Author Share Posted May 11, 2010 I transfered all my pages and info over to wordpress and wanted a few people to take another look at it. kansasoutlawwrestling.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mailbagmedia Posted May 13, 2010 Share Posted May 13, 2010 the skull image on the left looks like a place holder. it doesn't look right, like it is strech out to make it a separator for the Top 5 links. Maybe choose a different background color besides black. it makes the site gloomy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted May 13, 2010 Author Share Posted May 13, 2010 It is a place holder for pictures of my roster members but I"m trying to figure out what is the right size to make that image so that I'll look right with the rest of the page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thewooleymammoth Posted May 13, 2010 Share Posted May 13, 2010 still looks bad on wide res, the background image does not stay centered Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtremer360 Posted May 13, 2010 Author Share Posted May 13, 2010 How can I fix that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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