blufish Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 Hi guys. I've been working on my site recently I think it's near completion. I want to know what you guys think. Try not to mess it up please. http://www.frozenoven.com Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maq Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 Do you have a specific audience you want to attract? Is this just a general fun site you're building? It's a pretty clean and simple design, which is good, but here are a few tips I thought could make it a little better. -Change header, it's really big, and the outside of your letters are like fuzzy or choppy looking. -Add some pictures and color. -Try to format by using tables. -Add date/time in your chatbox. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blufish Posted August 22, 2008 Author Share Posted August 22, 2008 Do you have a specific audience you want to attract? Is this just a general fun site you're building? It's a pretty clean and simple design, which is good, but here are a few tips I thought could make it a little better. -Change header, it's really big, and the outside of your letters are like fuzzy or choppy looking. -Add some pictures and color. -Try to format by using tables. -Add date/time in your chatbox. What screen size are you using? must be really big. date / time in chatbox is coming soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maq Posted August 23, 2008 Share Posted August 23, 2008 It's not my screen size. In my opinion, smaller text in a heading looks better. That reminds me, I have to change mine.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fadion Posted August 24, 2008 Share Posted August 24, 2008 I'm ok with the liquid design, but a relative width image? The header image is getting pixelated in my resolution and from my point of view, that's a bad thing. The design is pretty boring. It lacks style, details, colors and typography. In my opinion there is nothing to improve there, as the only thing to do would be a redesign and sorry if it sounds harsh. At least change the fonts... -Try to format by using tables. Shouldn't we avoid tables at any cost? It applies to everything except tabular data, but I'm not seeing any need for tabular display there. PS: Those games you have in the site are all (or almost) from MiniClip. Is it allowed by MiniClip? Just wondering... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonLewis Posted August 24, 2008 Share Posted August 24, 2008 I think MiniClip (from memory) did have the option of hosting the games on your own website. Anyway, I will agree with Guilty Gear. It's a very bland layout. Lot's of flat colors with no images and horrible font. Times New Roman (serif font) isn't really meant for the web. Sans-serif fonts (Tahoma!) are more web-based fonts. You also repeat the background image, but the background image isn't the correct size. This results in a strange looking background for the content and header area. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blufish Posted August 25, 2008 Author Share Posted August 25, 2008 I didn't set the font it just goes by the default of your browser. Yes, Miniclip does let you use some of their games on your pages. Do you guys really care about the font so much? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nrg_alpha Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 I didn't set the font it just goes by the default of your browser. ... Do you guys really care about the font so much? Font presentation plays quite a large role in the overall look of a site. Everything from type-face to size and colour can help make or break a site. So IMHO, yes, fonts matter! I would set your fonts in css (that way, you just need to manipulate the css file in question and have your font changes propogate site wide). Never leave browsers to pump out default fonts... it can have detrimental effects on overall appearences. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lostprophetpunk Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 You may want to try a 1px black border for all of the boxes, just to help it separate from the background a bit, and ti will also make it look a little neater. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jabop Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 What does this site have to offer?... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blufish Posted August 26, 2008 Author Share Posted August 26, 2008 What does this site have to offer?... Did you look at it? the home page explains everything... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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