oldmanice Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 www.waterlakefield.com Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
zq29 Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Your server. Times out for me. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90679 Share on other sites More sharing options...
448191 Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 [quote author=SemiApocalyptic link=topic=107825.msg433035#msg433035 date=1158094113]Your server. Times out for me.[/quote]LOL! ;D Same here. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90697 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gijew Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Just adding my "didn't work either" here. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90700 Share on other sites More sharing options...
oldmanice Posted September 13, 2006 Author Share Posted September 13, 2006 Oh ok try this then http://www.waterlakefield.com/ Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90824 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 Coming soon, plus an image, and 'for now visit' links to sites you didn't mention.What's to critique? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90826 Share on other sites More sharing options...
oldmanice Posted September 13, 2006 Author Share Posted September 13, 2006 Well is the wrighting in the center and the image? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90834 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 Oh, [b]that's[/b] what you want critiqued? I'll assume you mean the text alignment.Coming soon is vertically aligned on the centre of the image. The image is not horizontally centered on the page. When you have something worth critiquing, feel free to post the URL. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90836 Share on other sites More sharing options...
448191 Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 [quote author=AndyB link=topic=107825.msg433202#msg433202 date=1158115057]...When you have something worth critiquing, feel free to post the URL.[/quote]Just make sure the server is actually up, because it is still timing out. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90953 Share on other sites More sharing options...
zq29 Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 [quote author=448191 link=topic=107825.msg433323#msg433323 date=1158144322][quote author=AndyB link=topic=107825.msg433202#msg433202 date=1158115057]...When you have something worth critiquing, feel free to post the URL.[/quote]Just make sure the server is actually up, because it is still timing out.[/quote]Same here, still. Are you running this from a server at home? If not, you should consider switching hosts... Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-90955 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel0 Posted September 13, 2006 Share Posted September 13, 2006 1. Do not use (nonbreaking-)spaces to move the text in to be centered. Use the text-align CSS attribute.2. Make sure it validates: http://validator.w3.org3. Use XHTML instead of HTML.4. Instead of [quote]For Now Visit: Visit Kieran's official siteFor Now Visit: Visit Kieran's official Index For Now Visit: Visit my official MySpace page [/quote] use [quote]For now visit:Kieran's official siteKieran's official IndexMy official MySpace page[/quote]5. Put a page header (e.g. using h1) Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/20548-what-needs-improving/#findComment-91119 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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