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#1 oldmanice

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 08:26 PM

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#2 Kris

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 08:48 PM

Your server. Times out for me.

#3 448191

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 09:20 PM

Your server. Times out for me.


LOL!  ;D Same here.

#4 gijew

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Posted 12 September 2006 - 09:27 PM

Just adding my "didn't work either" here.
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#5 oldmanice

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 01:51 AM

Oh ok try this then http://www.waterlakefield.com/
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#6 AndyB

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 01:57 AM

Coming soon, plus an image, and 'for now visit' links to sites you didn't mention.

What's to critique?


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#7 oldmanice

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 02:09 AM

Well is the wrighting in the center and the image?
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#8 AndyB

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 02:37 AM

Oh, that's what you want critiqued? I'll assume you mean the text alignment.

Coming soon is vertically aligned on the centre of the image. The image is not horizontally centered on the page.  When you have something worth critiquing, feel free to post the URL.
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#9 448191

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 10:45 AM

...When you have something worth critiquing, feel free to post the URL.


Just make sure the server is actually up, because it is still timing out.

#10 Kris

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 10:55 AM

...When you have something worth critiquing, feel free to post the URL.


Just make sure the server is actually up, because it is still timing out.

Same here, still. Are you running this from a server at home? If not, you should consider switching hosts...

#11 Daniel0

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Posted 13 September 2006 - 03:31 PM

1. Do not use (nonbreaking-)spaces to move the text in to be centered. Use the text-align CSS attribute.
2. Make sure it validates: http://validator.w3.org
3. Use XHTML instead of HTML.
4. Instead of

For Now Visit: Visit Kieran's official site

For Now Visit: Visit Kieran's official Index

For Now Visit: Visit my official MySpace page

use

For now visit:
Kieran's official site
Kieran's official Index
My official MySpace page

5. Put a page header (e.g. using h1)




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