AV1611 Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 OK,I'm looking for constuctive critiques. This is my business website that is on my business card. Let er rip, but be helpful.Thanks Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
448191 Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 How about a link? :P Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-128362 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mb81 Posted November 22, 2006 Share Posted November 22, 2006 http://hydrogen.webhostfreaks.com/~baptlcom/bible/It's was in his profile.Here we go....--Your Page has no title--I'm not going to tell you to get rid of the iframes, I personally dislike them, but at least put the most active one (the bottom one) at the top of the page for better navigation--Just from a marketing standpoint, what is differentiating your site from Bible Gateway or Blue Letter Bible or sites like that? --due to navigation, nobody can bookmark any specific parts of your page--your search and menus need some help, I should be able to select all my options and hit go and come up with what I want, not wait through 3 seperate menu selections--you have the domain name, but it forwards to this webhost freaks site, do frame forwarding so it looks like that are still at baptistrevival.com to add credibility.That covers the basics. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-128692 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AV1611 Posted November 23, 2006 Author Share Posted November 23, 2006 The Site in my profile is NOT the site I wanted critiqued.I am sorry I forgot the link so here it is...www.blmservices.comAgain, sorry for my air-headedness :P Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-129259 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philip Posted November 24, 2006 Share Posted November 24, 2006 In the contact form there sure is a big space between the text describing what the textbox is about, and the actual text box. (FF2) Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-129425 Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiss73 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 [quote author=448191 link=topic=115846.msg471831#msg471831 date=1164171418]How about a link? :P[/quote]LOOLexactly what I was about to write, letter to letter. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-130305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiss73 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 [quote author=mb81 link=topic=115846.msg472175#msg472175 date=1164219887]--I'm not going to tell you to get rid of the iframes, I personally dislike them, but at least put the most active one (the bottom one) at the top of the page for better navigation[/quote]who does not hate iframes? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-130307 Share on other sites More sharing options...
zq29 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 I appear to be just getting a page with the date, time and a few details about my ISP on a blue background. Oh, and there appears to be, what looks like, a bible quote on there too. Am I missing something, or is the site down?Please stay on topic swiss73. (I personally don't hate iFrames - They're useful at times.) Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-130415 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AV1611 Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 Sorry about the confusion.www.blmservices.com andblmservices.comshould both be the same site.I have a virtual site at the same IP at amdlinux.blmservices.com which is a test page with some IP info, etc.I was working on the name server over the weekend, and may have caused some of the problems posted SA.Please let me know if I have my act together now... Sorry for the mix up. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-130700 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AV1611 Posted November 29, 2006 Author Share Posted November 29, 2006 BUMP sorry about the address confusion can we try again?www.blmservices.comThank You Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-132255 Share on other sites More sharing options...
txmedic03 Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 I've seen a post already with this site asking for critique...(the blm site anyway) the other one I'll leave alone because you didn't ask, but if you would like a few small annoyances pointed out I'd be happy to. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-134673 Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfcry044 Posted January 3, 2007 Share Posted January 3, 2007 I love it! Good job! It's very nice. Many Christian based websites out there are horrible to look at. It's refreshing to see one that is well designed, and not hosted on Geocities. :P Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-152286 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hix_boty Posted January 3, 2007 Share Posted January 3, 2007 well .. the site looks ok .. the colours are ok .. not disturbing ... i would say too little info .. gives the impresion of a very small bussines .. so no credibility .. but dont try to fill that with fairy tales ...My only real Critique ... EXACTLY IN THE WEBDESIGN PAGE ... YOU HAVE 3 LINKS ON THE LEFT ... WICH WHEN YOU READ THE TEXT .. YOU READ THOSE TOO THINKING ITS PART OF THE TEXT BUT BAD ALLIGNEMNTSO I WOULD SAY ... THE SPACE BETWEEN THE LINKS AND THE TEXT SHOULD BE BIGGER HERE ( AND IN THE FORM PAGE EARLYER MENTIONED IN THIS THREAD ... SMALLER ) AND TRY TO MAKE SOMETHING TO MAKE THOSE LINKS LOOK DIFFERENT FROM THE TEXT ( INFO ) .. AT LEAST DIFFERENT COLOR IF NOT BUTTONS.i HOPE THIS WILL DO :) Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-152300 Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfcry044 Posted January 3, 2007 Share Posted January 3, 2007 Oh, well I feel silly ;D I was looking at the wrong link. On that website, I would have to say maybe a little less shadow on the buttons, and no shadow for the images. But, that's just my humble opinion. Good site! It's lacking in something though...... I personally think Flash would look good in the banner, but I know many people don't like flash. Good job though! ;D Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-152306 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SharkBait Posted January 4, 2007 Share Posted January 4, 2007 Overall it seems nice. Simple and easy on the eyes.I broke your contact form these are the errors I get:[code]Notice: Undefined variable: mesmsg in /var/www/html/send.php on line 18Notice: Undefined variable: mesname in /var/www/html/send.php on line 19Notice: Undefined variable: mesemail in /var/www/html/send.php on line 20You entered an invalid email address[/code]On your webdesign section you have centered hyperlinks on the left, I'd like to see those as left aligned. Perhaps dress them up a little bit too.Footer: - I'd align them to the bottom. As there seems to be too much white space between your copyright and the bottom edge. - Do you need your address on every page? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-152688 Share on other sites More sharing options...
emehrkay Posted January 4, 2007 Share Posted January 4, 2007 i get js errors on the webdesign page Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/28055-my-business-is-off-the-ground-need-critique/#findComment-152997 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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