LiamProductions Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 Hey. Will someone check out my first ever site http://www.liamproductions.com Currently learning PHP. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pocobueno1388 Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 It looks very nice =] My only suggestion would be to do something more with the header banner, it's a bit dull. Other than that, looks good xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFilmGod Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 Link to Webtoolz doesn't work. You added a "w" in <a hwref its supposed to be <a href. Anyway, I really like the site. The colors are awesome. Change the header picture and maybe the font. I really don't like the font. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEoriginalDAG22 Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 Its good for your first site, looks better than my first But i suggest you add a feedback form in your contact me page, its not that big of a deal but it saves your visitors a little bit of time and energy when trying to contact you. And if you dont know how i'll be more than happy helping you out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Little Guy Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 on your previous work page, you have 1 site listed, you should change the .::BrickFilmStudios.com::. text to a link so people can see the page (I would open it in a new window). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ardyandkari Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 Its good for your first site, looks better than my first But i suggest you add a feedback form in your contact me page, its not that big of a deal but it saves your visitors a little bit of time and energy when trying to contact you. my thoughts exactly... it wasnt a template was it??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiamProductions Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 Hey. I would just like to say the banner is'nt a picture But i'm thinking of making it a picture to make the site better. And thanks for the suggestion of the previous page. Im doing that right now . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiamProductions Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 I have also fixed the Webtoolz button on the index.php file Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ardyandkari Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 still cant click webtoolz button on index.php firefox 2.0.0.4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiamProductions Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 Hmm, It should try refreshing. The reason it didn't work in the first place is because the tag was hrwef now i've fixed it to href so it should, it works for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ardyandkari Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 nope...still nothing. we're talking about the menu bar at the top right??? on the index page i refreshed and nothing...i cleared all cookies, temp files and nothing...checked the source and still get "hrwef"... i dont know... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiamProductions Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 Yes, the top menu bars Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redbullmarky Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 still in your source: <a hrwef="webtoolz.php">WebToolz</a> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiamProductions Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 Sorry. Its fixed now... I didn't upload it correctly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ardyandkari Posted June 18, 2007 Share Posted June 18, 2007 sorry, just being a nerd here, but your css and xhtml isn't valid. at the end of line 214 in the style sheet you need a }. .field { color : #BBB; font-size: 13px; font-family : arial, helvetica, sans-serif; background-color: #303030; border-left: #FFFFFF 1px solid; border-top: #FFFFFF 1px solid; border-right: #FFFFFF 1px solid; border-bottom: #FFFFFF 1px solid; should read: .field { color : #BBB; font-size: 13px; font-family : arial, helvetica, sans-serif; background-color: #303030; border-left: #FFFFFF 1px solid; border-top: #FFFFFF 1px solid; border-right: #FFFFFF 1px solid; border-bottom: #FFFFFF 1px solid;} your xhtml is much worse though... Result: Failed validation, 33 errors go here to fix the problems--->http://validator.w3.org personally i dont really care about these things, but some people do, so if you are going to claim valid css and xhtml, you should try to fix these errors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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