mike12255 Posted August 26, 2009 Share Posted August 26, 2009 hey, so i was wondering if some of you could take a look at my new design and give me some constructive critisiom,thanks. The website URL is: http://www.tutsondemand.com/new/ Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
kat32 Posted August 28, 2009 Share Posted August 28, 2009 hey, so i was wondering if some of you could take a look at my new design and give me some constructive critisiom,thanks. The website URL is: http://www.tutsondemand.com/new/ I like the logo of your website. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908080 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cetanu Posted August 28, 2009 Share Posted August 28, 2009 Well, here it goes. -- I like the header of your website. -- The home page has this little tiny body of text and a load of white space. It looks off-balance/empty, barren, etcetera. "Tutorials" is spelled wrong on the home page (in the paragraph), it says "tutorails". I may just be an annoying pest, but there are also some commas missing in the text, so it makes it confusing. I'll use the classic example: "Eats, shoots, and leaves" is different from "Eats shoots and leaves". -- On the home page, rather than saying, "You can USE this page to contact us.", why don't you link to the page to make it easier? (Even though it's right there in the nav bar) -- It says "Or if your just curious" it should be "Or, if you're just curious..." -- All of the pages are dead links Maybe it's supposed to be that way now... -- Only 7 Errors! Niiiice! -- Awwwww Invalid CSS, but not bad. Overall, pretty good. Just the things I said up there ^, thanks for putting up with my English grammar-Naziness. XD Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908114 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike12255 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Share Posted August 28, 2009 thanks pages should not be dead any more, ill work on the grammer and vailidation errors soon, appriciate the comments Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908151 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cetanu Posted August 28, 2009 Share Posted August 28, 2009 Okay, About Page: - Its main focus was to automate website ??? - "Toadys" should be today's - Purchese should be purchase - Inteactive should be interactive -Broken link to Profile/Tutorials page. Donate Page: - appriciate should be appreciate Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908157 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike12255 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Share Posted August 28, 2009 thanks for correcting my bad grammer mates going through in about an error to make all the pages, i know tutorials page is down, its cause im working on my video script, and profile im still trying to make a unique style for it Donation page, profile page, and tutorails page are all under construction! Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908554 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike12255 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Share Posted August 28, 2009 and we have no errors! still working on css that will take a bit longer Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908576 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFilmGod Posted August 29, 2009 Share Posted August 29, 2009 I loved the look of your website, until I saw the google ad. Another guy trying to make a quick buck. Get over it. Google ads aren't a way to pay off this zesty habit of designing websites. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-908740 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldb358 Posted August 30, 2009 Share Posted August 30, 2009 i like the logo, and actually the whole site except there was way to much white space, on top of that it didn't fit in my browser horizontally, which normally isn't a problem i know i have a low resolution, but with all the white space it was kind of annoying Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-909174 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFilmGod Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 I didn't notice that your website size was smaller than the "standard" website resolution. Your website shouldn't exceed 1000px so it could fit in a 1024 resolution. 1024 is the standard and should probably stay for awhile. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-909481 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam Posted September 1, 2009 Share Posted September 1, 2009 Whilst I agree the header does look good, I think the text 'artificial intelligence' lets it down - doesn't look as sharp as the rest. Also those images do look like something off of iRobot, are they definitely not copyright? Apart from that though same as the other comments really, too much white space and remove the Google Ads. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-910141 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gevans Posted September 1, 2009 Share Posted September 1, 2009 Your nav has nice fast hovers which is always good. But when on a page, the active link isn't shown as live. You could add the hover styles to a class, and assign that to the active link. A lot easier for users to see where they are! Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-910178 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike12255 Posted September 2, 2009 Author Share Posted September 2, 2009 Whilst I agree the header does look good, I think the text 'artificial intelligence' lets it down - doesn't look as sharp as the rest. Also those images do look like something off of iRobot, are they definitely not copyright? Apart from that though same as the other comments really, too much white space and remove the Google Ads. I designed that header based of a tutorial i saw that included the robots, if i can find the website link again ill post the credits Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-910647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam Posted September 2, 2009 Share Posted September 2, 2009 Not the header itself, I mean the images used within it... You modeled the actual robot? Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-910770 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcombs_31 Posted September 2, 2009 Share Posted September 2, 2009 There is definitely too much 'white' space. I fail to see the point in ads unless you are generating a lot of traffic, which you certainly shouldn't have at this point because I don't really see why someone would come back to your site? If this is a portfolio site, you DEFINITELY shouldn't have ads. A portfolio site is to gain clients and present your work, not gain ad revenue even if you receive a lot of traffic. What exactly is the donate button for? Why would people send you money? At this point you don't even have any tutorials. Check out http://gotoandlearn.com/. This site has a wealth of video tutorials and I don't see any ads or donate buttons. You also shouldn't try to scale up your paypal button. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-911034 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sKunKbad Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 I have a 1024 x 600 screen res, and get a horizontal scroll bar with this design, when it really shouldn't require one. I also see nothing but the banner and menu when loading the page. To me, the banner is a bit too large in height. Quote Link to comment https://forums.phpfreaks.com/topic/172022-new-design/#findComment-911399 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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