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#1 jcombs_31

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 05:00 PM

I'm debating if I like my business site or not and was playing around with photoshop a bit.

My current site is http://www.multimedia-technologies.com

I started a drawing here http://multimedia-te...m/misc/mmt.jpg  There is a lot of empty space in the drawing, but it gives you an idea.  I don't know, what do you think?



#2 redbullmarky

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 05:25 PM

the style changes in the new one are much better, including the header/logo/3 coloured panels. however, the layout in the old one was better, with the text inside the 3 boxes instead of underneath, and the text above/below them.
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Posted 14 September 2006 - 05:53 PM

well, I'd have the same lists in the boxes, they are part of the "empty space" i mentioned.  I think I will change the column under to match that of the current site.  Let me fix and repost then tell me.

edit: uploaded some changes, check again.

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 06:28 PM

It is nice. Really deep colours. I see what you mean now about "subtle" gradients!

Your current side - is good - overdoing it a little/lot on the "sloped lines" and the hover for the menu tho.

With the new one - there is a small bit of confusion IMO.
You have the 3 coloured boxes - BLUE - RED - GREEN
You have 3 coloured (pill shaped) buttons a distance below them - Well I thought they were colour co-ordinated.
E.g. clicking on the green pill shaped button  - Does that go to the CONTACT page or the PC Repairs page??

It would stand out to me intially to go to the PC repair page as it is green. Anyways - its minor.

Perhaps that what Mark was on about the layout under the coloured boxes.

Will be interested to see where you go from here.

-steve





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Posted 14 September 2006 - 06:51 PM

You are correct about the pill buttons, I had columns that were extended info about the services, but changed it.  I guess I kept the colors to match the columns, but I can see how it may cause confusion.  Maybe I'll use a greyscale or stick with one color.  THe main things I wanted to change are the rushed portfolio and contact pages.  I started to fix them on the current site, and then decided i didn't like where it was going, hence the new design changes.

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 07:22 PM

I don't know, everything i have ever seen you create was amazing, I look up to your design abilities quite a bit, I don't think I could find anything wrong with your designs, I looked over it a few minutes, and it looks great.

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 07:37 PM

As businessman332211 said it looks great.
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Posted 14 September 2006 - 08:55 PM

much better. maybe it was the uneven heights of the columns that seemed out of place...
as you don't have the blue background any longer, i'm not sure though if the header/footer are too wide (slightly) for the 3 columns. doesn't look bad, but just wondering if it'd look better otherwise.

otherwise, spot on.
"you have to keep pissing in the wind to learn how to keep your shoes dry..."

I say old chap, that is rather amusing!

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Posted 14 September 2006 - 10:05 PM

I'm impressed.  :)

Looking forward to seeing/reviewing the actual site.

Edit: concerning the empty space at the bottom; consider NOT putting anything there, just reduce it's vertical size a bit.

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Posted 18 September 2006 - 07:01 AM

Both of them look really great. I can't decide which one is better however.

#11 jcombs_31

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 02:21 PM

here is the xhtml version to compare.  Should give a clearer picture.

http://www.multimedi...ologies.com/v2/

#12 redbullmarky

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 03:17 PM

very nice. only thing at this stage i'd suggest is in your 'Contact Us' column - i think the address/phone numbers need to be seperated a bit maybe just by bolding/darkening the 'Mailing Address:', 'Phones:' and 'Email:' headings.

otherwise, i'd personally run with the new one as it looks like a cleaner more modern version of the old (even though the old one is bloody good too!)
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I say old chap, that is rather amusing!

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 04:22 PM

Yea, I agree on the contact column, but when I bold them it doesn't look balanced.  I'll think about the best way to do it.

#14 Daniel0

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 04:54 PM

I think it looks fine as it is. You should go with v2.

#15 redbullmarky

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 05:03 PM

Yea, I agree on the contact column, but when I bold them it doesn't look balanced.  I'll think about the best way to do it.

bold but using a lighter grey to take the edge off instead might work. it has for me in the past.
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Posted 25 September 2006 - 06:38 PM

finished. 

http://www.multimedi...chnologies.com/

I still have to add the terms page and some more features, but for the most part, it is complete.

Final comments?

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Posted 25 September 2006 - 07:09 PM

just something you might want to think about, on the 3 colored boxed, have some kind of css, with hover, that relates to that color, I don't know if it would be better or worse, but it's something I was thinking might look good?  Everything on it looks good though.

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Posted 25 September 2006 - 09:21 PM

just something you might want to think about, on the 3 colored boxed, have some kind of css, with hover, that relates to that color, I don't know if it would be better or worse, but it's something I was thinking might look good?  Everything on it looks good though.


I don't see what that would accomplish.

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Posted 26 September 2006 - 10:07 AM

I like it a lot.
Its very very nice to navigate and read through.

Im suprised however as to why you dont have it xhtml 1.1?

Also - for the Portfolio page (which the same as others - done excellent) you should open up "Visit Site" in a new Browser Window.

It might be nicer to have a a:hover for links in the text - e.g. remove the underline on a:hover.

Its really nice - and gives an excellent idea of prices and functionality.

Rgds,
Steve




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